October 22, 2008
Wilderness
Synopsis
Wilderness
A young girl has nightmares about a hunter killing people. On a class camping trip her nightmare crashes in to reality when the hunter kills off her classmates and teachers. After finding out the truth behind the killings she realizes that her only chance of survival is to kill or be killed.
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Paradise
FADE IN:
EXT. COUNTRY ROAD - DAY
a pink convertible speeds down the road and then pulls over ALYSSA gets out with a slight hint of determination and opens the trunk and pulls out a road map and gets back in the car
INT. CAR
ELIZABETH pulls down her pink shades with her tanned and well kept hands and looks at Alyssa as she gets back in the car with the map
ELIZABETH
Ally I can’t believe you talked me in to going with you to find this place
Elizabeth puts her shades back on and starts the car
ALYSSA
You didn’t have to go plus this place I don’t know it draws me
ELIZABETH
Draws?
SARA with her messy hair and black lipstick suddenly sits up form laying down in the back seat and looks at Elizabeth
SARA
Yea Like a sale draws you Liz
Elizabeth Flips Sara off and turns to Alyssa
ELIZABETH
Ok I get why you want to go to this place but just answer me this.
Why did we have to bring her?
INT. FBI OFFICE - NIGHT
Ronald sanders and Senator Russell are seated at a desk and ERIC a young solder very disciplined. Eric and Sentor Russell shake hands and the Sentor shows Eric a picture of his daughter Elizabeth and Eric takes the picture and a picket from Ronald and walks out.
INT. HELICOPTER
Eric’s team is sitting in the chopper and passing the pictures that Eric got around JOHNSON gives one of his sly smug smiles he’s always been good with the ladies holds up a picture of Elizabeth
JOHNSON
Ooo this one is a hottie defiantly would not mind plowing that. Hey Eric you think these girls will want to give us a big thank you for saving them
Eric looks over
ERIC
Maybe her dad will want to thank you for letting his little girl thank you
JOHNSON
Umm maybe you’re right
ERIC
Maybe?
Eric leans over to Izzy and kisses her
EXT. VILLAGE OUTSKRITS - DAY
The team repeals down a line and Rico and Johnson take explosives out of a bag the team rushes to the door with guns drawn Eric looks at it
ERIC
Rico, Johnson blow it
Johnson and Rico set explosives and blow up the door
EXT. VILLAGE
The team walks in and looks around and sees no one in the village Eric motions everyone to split up and search the huts
INT. VILLAGE HUT
Johnson opens the door and enters with gun drawn he walks to the bed room as he passes a closet a villager jumps out and grabs him they struggle
JOHNSON
Shits… die fucker die
Johnson reaching for his gun the villagers stabs him in the leg and goes to stab him in the chest Johnson covers his eyes and he hears a gunshot and looks Izzy stands there with smoke oozing from her (gun hole
IZZY
You ok
JOHNSON
Fucker stabbed my leg
Izzy leans out the door
IZZY
Medic!
Michaels runs in and tends to Johnson’s wounds as Eric runs into the hut
ERIC
What happened here?
Looks over at Izzy then his focus turns to Johnson
Johnson how many times have I told you can’t shoot every girl that blows you off
Smiles at Izzy
JOHNSON
Yea real funny Eric make fun of the cripple
Eric makes a face
ERIC
You’re not a cripple now what happened
Eric paces
JOHNSON
I was inspecting the hut and she jumped out of the closet over there
And stab my leg and we…
The sound fades out as Eric stairs at Izzy
Eric! Eric!
He slams back to reality
ERIC
Yea ok lets press on there’s a graveyard this way
EXT. GRAVEYARD
They enter through an iron fence
ERIC
Ok everyone split up were looking for a path
They walk around the Izzy calls out
ERIC AND RICO
Iz what’s wrong
IZZY
The graves look Elizabeth Russell
Izzy runs to another grave then to another
Alyssa Austen
She runs to another one
Sara Hugh. There all here the girls Alyssa, Sara, Elizabeth. Eric were too late
Eric looks at her
ERIC
Dig'em up
Izzy looks at obvily repulsed by what Eric suggests
IZZY
What why
Eric
We need to see the bodies it could be a ruse
Johnson, Rico, and Michaels dig up the grave Izzy walks away from the desecration and as she’s walking away she hears Rico yell
Rico
I hit something
Izzy runs back to see the coffin open and a man’s body in the dead man look to be about 26 Eric reaches in the man’s pocket and takes out his ID
ERIC
He’s a privet investigator
Eric looks in his pocket again and finds an envelope with a wad of cash and a note and a picture of Alyssa Austin Eric reads the note aloud
Mr. Redgrave my name is Sam Austen and my daughter Alyssa went missing 2 weeks ago with her friend Elizabeth Russell and my step daughter Sara Hugh I have no faith in the fbi’s ability to find my daughter I know that if they do the senators daughter will be a priority not mine so I am asking you to find my Alyssa as well as Sara enclosed is your payment of $10,000 (5,000 per girl) and a photo of my daughter with her sister please find them.
It was dated 2 weeks ago Michaels any cause of death
Michaels dose a quick exam
MICHAELS
He was stab about 10-20 times 7 times in the chest 8 times in the lower adamen and 4 times in the back with various blades and…
A sudden look of fright comes over his face
Eric
And?
Michael’s gulps
MICHAELS
I can’t tell for sure but from the looks of the blood patterns and the rate of healing I’d would say these stabbings took place over a week’s time and he was alive when they buried him
Izzy steps forward and has a confused look on her face
IZZY
How can you tell?
Michaels takes a deep breath and points to the lid of the coffin there are tons of scratch marks and a finger nail embedded in the wood, Michaels lifts the man's hand and he has a finger nail missing Rico leans back on a headstone and all of a suddenly an alarm goes off the team splits up to hide 6 villagers come out to and Rico snips them the team backs up o a wall and the floor gives way
INT. JAIL CELL – NIGHT
Elizabeth passes back and forth yelling at Alyssa
ELIZABETH
Ally why do you always pull this shit every time you want to…
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April 9, 2008
The Night
April 22
11 am
Alyssa Austin sits tapping her foot as her school mates talk about her mother’s disappearance. Even though they talk of vampires and witches she knows what happened. In anger she yells “my mother found another man and ran away with him plain and simple” everyone stairs at her. She sits her teacher comes to confret her she cries into her math teacher Jake McCarty’s shoulder. As he calms her “there there its ok” he says “maybe u should go home and rest”. She gets up nods her head and leaves
7 pm
Alyssa in her room getting ready she puts on this tight black corset and tight leather pants she hears a horn and goes outside and gets in the car
8 pm
Outside a club Alyssa checks out the line to see if there’s anyone there that will cover her someone whispers in her ear “u feeling better” she turns around it’s her teacher “Mr. McCarty what r u ummm…” she stammers he grabs her hands “u want to go in there” he asks she nods “I can get u in” he assures she walks closer to him “well what can I do for u in return” she starts to grab his dick through his pants he stops her and replies “nothing just knowing that a student of mine gets home safe and sound” she smiles they go in and start dancing but something comes over them and they start to kiss deeply
11 pm
Jake drops her off at her house and drives away Alyssa climbs up through her window and see her dad sitting on her bed crying she starts damage control “daddy it’s ok I’m home nothing bad happened I just went out with friends I’m sorry” he just looks at her 3 men walk in the room she looks at her dad“Geez dad u didn’t have to call the National Guard” she claims one of the men order the others to grab her she screams. “let me go u fuckers daddddy” he stands up and says “Lotin we had a deal” Lotin waves his hand and a women is brought in she runs to Alyssa father Alyssa realizes that it’s her mother as the men drag her away
April 23
? ??
Alyssa wakes up in a dirty cell she walks over to the bars she sees Lotin coming her way she runs and sits in the middle of the floor Lotin walks up to her cell “good morning my girl do you know who I am” he greets “Lotin” she replies he smiles his fangs showing “very good I like that now little girl do u know what I am?” she answers as she stands and takes a step forward “a fucking piss dinking ass hole” he walks through the bars making Alyssa fall to the floor he proclaims “I am Lotin king of the vampires and u will show me respect” he raises his hand her she lifts off the ground and he pushes her to a wall she struggles against him he reaches between her legs and feels her pussy and whispers “you are mine now your father traded you for your mother years ago I just had to wait till you were ripe he smiles his sharp finger nail pierces through her pants and into her pussy she screams as he finger fucks her “ I will never be your wife” she says “wife?” he questions “no one said anything about u being my wife I have plenty already u my dear will birth my children ones that can walk in the sun ones that cannot be killed” he looks at her and her mouth opens he takes his finger out of her pussy and shoves it in her mouth he releases her as he leaves the cell leavening her in tears.
? ??
An unknown amount of time has passed since Alyssa encounter with her captor finally 2 men come and drag her out of her cell she’s tries to grab anything she can reach but is struck by one of the men she awakes in a lavish bed room with lotin sitting on the bed next to her she tries to move away but notices she is tied down to the bed lotin laughs “You are not going anywhere” she looks at him and questions “where am I” he smiles and strokes her hair “your room my dear that is if you’re a good girl and do not try to escape’ he replies she quivers as he touches her she looks down and sees she is now wearing a dress “we had the Dr. take a look at u to see if I did any damage earlier your fine my dear just some minor cuts” he says as he lifts her dress up “you need to learn to relax when I do that” he pushes his finger in her and she passes out
April 26
3:30 pm
With Alyssa gone from school for 2 days now Jake started to get worried and dropped by her house a women answered the door “hello ma’am I’m Jake McCarty Alyssa’s teacher I have not seen her in class and wanted to see if she was ok” Jake asks The women replies “she’s gone to live with relatives and will not be returning” “well ma’am with all due respect I would like to speak with her father on this matter” Jake says the women answers “I am Alyssa’s mother so please do not bother us again” she slams the door in his face as he leaves he see a necklace on the ground and recognizes it as ally’s he takes it with him
5 pm
Jake goes to his brother Jackson who’s a cop and asks him to investigate And Jake goes with him to the house Jake looks around as Jackson ask some questions he looks down looks down and sees a document As her reads it he throws up
Dear Mr. Austen,As per our family agreement I accept your oldest daughter as payment and I returned your wife but be warned your youngest daughter that she must breeds when Alyssa’s life is gone we will take the next Austen in line You’re Lord,Lotin
He takes the paper with him and leaves searches for “lotin” online and what he finds is highly disturbing
Lotin (lo-tin) A vampire dating back to the 1600’s as a boy lotin would drain the blood of pigs a drink it when his parents died at age 15 he got his family fortune and began his sick campaign he would kidnap village kids attempting to breed with them then killing them when he was caught he swore his life to the devil a few days later his grave was empty and his castle was gone. Reports that he is trying to breed with humans and create a race of super vampires is strong
9 pm
Alyssa wakes up on a bed next to her is lotin undressing he looks at her and says “your awake my dear I’m glad I was afraid you would still be asleep for this” she look down and sees she’s nude with her legs tied spread open lotin climbs on top of her she looks away as he slides into her virgin cunt she screams he leans down as to kiss her shoulder but bites it instead sucking on her blood as he pumps in and out of her he lifts her up and slides in her ass as her screams get louder and slams back in her pussy as he cums he climbs off her body shaking he turns to his servant girls “get her cleaned up and ready for me later” he barks as he leaves the girls run warm water over Alyssa’s body who is still shaking from the trauma 11:59 pmLotin returns to Alyssa’s room she is now dressed in a formal gown he starts to untie her as he speaks “now young lady I have done all I can do that was the extant of what will happen every day so you need not fear anymore you may wonder around the grounds as you wish but be warned if you try to get away or act up the punishment will be severe he put an ankle bracelet on her her looks at him he replies “what you think I would let you roam completely free” he leaves the room as her dose he says “there are clothes in the closet feel free to wear them as you like good night” he shut's the door she sits on her bed thinking of what she can do and realizes that there is no hope.
April 27
7 am
Jake shows up at Jackson’s apt “do you know anything about a man named lotin” Jake asks Jackson gulps “some of my missing persons cases have led back to a man named lotin but I haven’t located him yet why?”Jackson asks Jake replies “I think he has something to do with ally’s disappearance” Jackson says “Jake threes no disappearance she went to go live with family I’ve spoke to them what is your obsession with this girl?”Jake looking at pictures on the wall of them as kids he answers “well we shared a couple of nice times together” Jackson grabs jakes arm and turns him around “a couple of nice times“ Jackson lets go of Jake “you better not have done something illegal that I’m going to regret” Jake replies “ that your going to regret? Anyway all that happened was I got her in to blinx and we danced and kissed and I dropped her off at home then the next day she was missing “Jackson says “godamnit Jake ok were not going to peruse this anymore.” Jake asks “what why not?” Jackson answers “because if the police get involved and learn of this your prime suspect no. 1 I won’t let that happened to my big brother” Jake replies “lotin took her I know it here I have proof” he shows Jackson the note from lotin Jackson sits down as he reads it “I know this man through some of my investigations I’ve come across him several times he seems to know a lot about this lets go”
9:45 am
Jake and Jackson pull up to this old house it looks deserted “you sure someone lives here” Jake asks Jackson hits him as they walk in “Curtis” Jackson yells “I just want to ask you some questions” but no one answers he holds his hand up to stop Jake from moving he yells again “its about lotin” a figure comes out from the shadows Curtis says “do you believe in the darkness now” Jake walks towards him “who is lotin and what does he want with Alyssa Austen” he asks “he found an Austen? He must I wonder if she’s a pure blood. If she is then were all doomed. Why else could he…” Jake stops him “what are you talking about? Pure blood? Doomed?” Jake asks “bloodlines. It all dates back to bloodlines. Back in the old days when people believed and feared in the dark lords it was families and bloodlines that were the rule of the land. For example one family was to be the dark lords servants till the end of days another was to be the food another was breeding the Austen line was the breeders to form a new race vampires that were almost human it would have changed history but it never worked they needed a pure blood?” Tells Curtis Jake interrupts “pure blood. Isn’t all blood pure?” Curtis yells “NO kids come from two parents a mother and a father from driftnet bloodlines a pure blood would be same blood line as in...” Jackson interrupts him “incest.” Curtis continues “a close family member like a father mother or sibling. “he goes to run but the boys grab him he sees the same mark on their arm Curtis turns and asks them “ where does your family hail from” Jackson answers “LA” but Jake adds “but we were from here long ago” Curtis drops to his knees “long ago your family member was king James fell in love with a young Austen girl but the lord already had his eye on her and was taken but escaped and met the king they runaway together but the dark lords minions found them they retrieved the girl but only brought back James’s head” Jake and Jackson gulp Curtis points to them “if this girl this Alyssa is truly a pure blood it is your duty to rescue her before the lord can soil her or else the world will be lost and given to him on a silver plate” he goes to leave when Jake asks “who is lotin” Curtis answers “ my boy he is pure evil he was the one who made vald famous. Lotin is the first and and the most deadly be careful of your encounters with him or he will tear you limb from limb.” Jackson asks “how do you know all this” but he is gone the boys follow him but reach a dead end with nothing there but a map on the ground and a large blood red X on a castle the boys leave.
12 pm
Alyssa is walking around the castle but does not see anyone until she reaches the kitchen there she finds a woman cooking the woman asks “would you like some lunch I can fix it for you its best you get your fill before the master wakes” Alyssa looks puzzled “where is everyone?” she asks the woman answers “sleeping till dark then all hell breaks loss oh please ma’am don’t tell the lord I said that” Alyssa smiles “its ok I don’t want to be here myself can you tell me what’s going on here I don’t understand” the woman tell Alyssa about the past her family and lotin as she eats the woman sees the time “ it’s almost six ma’am you better go back to your room and put on a nice gown before lotin awakes if you want him in a good mood and trust me you do want him in a good mood” Alyssa leaves
6 pm
Alyssa is dressed in a nice sliver and blue gown looking out her window when she feels hands on her shoulders she turns to face lotin she lowers her head and says meekly “hello Sir” he smiles “very nice my dear I see you have spent some time with Rosa” he says she replies “who” he answers the young girl the cook” “yes Sir I have” she says he leans in to kiss her undoing her dress as he does “I see you have come to terms with your new life” he says as he rubs her tits “ yes Sir Rosa told me that I have no choice but to do what you want and if I do as you say then you will be happy and that will be better for me” he laughs “yes it will go better for you if I’m happy” he leads her to the bed and they lay on it he climbs on top of her and slides in her pussy but this time it she feels no pain as he pumps at her pussy her hands around his back she’s feels a weird sencesation as he fucks her she hears him whisper ”cum” and she starts to scream uncontrollably as she does he cums deep in her pussy gets up and gives her a kiss before he leaves she goes to the bath room and cleans up.
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